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Living in an apartment

| 2020-09-17 20:22
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It is good to live in your own house, but living in an apartment is best. Apartment is easy to maintain and you don't have to worry of  security and repairs. You have immediate neighbors and you can enjoy good facilities. Im not sure but maybe apartment cost is cheaper to house cost.


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It is good to live in your own house, but living in an apartment is best. Apartment is easy to maintain and you don't have to worry of  security and repairs. You have immediate neighbors and you can enjoy good facilities. Im not sure but maybe apartment cost is cheaper to house cost.


     It is good to live in your own house, but living in an apartment is better. Apartment is easy to maintain and
     you don't have to worry about security and repairs. You have immediate neighbors and you can enjoy
     good facilities. I'm not sure but maybe apartment cost is cheaper than house cost.

      >  You are only comparing between living in a house and in apartment.  Use the comparative "better".
      >  "Worry (verb) + about" is a fixed expression. 
      >  Please be mindful of the contracted form of "I am" which is  "I'm".
      >  "Cheaper (adjective) + than" is to be used when comparing.

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