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I feel down

| 2020-08-28 19:54
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* Student's sentence : 

    I feel down today Its one of those days when you feel alone and isolated. i don't want to talk with anyone.           What is   wrong with me?

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* Correction :     Student's sentence        Corrected sentence        Grammar explanation       Better sentence    



I feel down today Its one of those days when you feel alone and isolated. i don't want to talk with anyone. What is wrong with me?


       I feel down today.  It's one of those days when I feel alone and isolated. I don't want to talk with anyone. What
       is wrong with me?

  > Please don't forget your punctuation mark. 
  > "It's" should be in a contracted form as you mean to write "It is".
  > The pronoun "you" should be changed to "I" to refer back to the writer as the subject of the sentence.
 >  Do  note that the first word of the sentence should be capitalized. Be careful of the small but important
     details when writing. They matter.
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