Correction: Student's sentence Corrected sentence Grammar explanation Better sentence
These days, I can see a lot of people who do exercise.
These days, I can see a lot of people who exercise.
You can just remove the do. Or you can have do exercising.
I'm also exercising now, the reason I exercised in the first place was just to lose weight.
I'm also exercising now, the reason I exercised in the first place was just to lose weight.
Please be careful with your spacing. The rest of the sentence is correct.
I'm still on a diet, and now I want to take a 'Body Profile.
Correct sentence. Just with the punctuation maybe. 'Body Profile'
I think the reasons why other people exercise are similar.
This sentence is correct.
I think the people start exercising to lose weight, After dieting and building a body, to do exercise to increase their's strength and take a body profile.
I think people start exercising to lose weight, after dieting and building a body, to do exercise to increase their strength and take a body profile.
After - after - the proper use of capital letters
the people - people
their's - their
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