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Usually, if I do university classes or things that I have to do, I have a little time to get a license for my jobs and I want to do for hobbies.
So When it's vacation, I want to try various hobbies, develop my basic physical strength through exercise that I usually do, ad try hard to get a certificate!
Usually, if I do university classes or things that I have to do, I have a little time to get a license for my jobs and I want to do for hobbies.
This sentence is correct.
So when it's vacation, I want to try various hobbies, develop my physical strength through exercise that I usually do, and try hard to get a certificate!
Capital letters are used in the beginning of the sentence or proper nouns. "When is not a proper noun."
Most of your sentences are correct though I encourage you to make longer sentences next time.