* Correction: Student's sentence Corrected sentence Grammar explanation Better sentence
My favorite activity is meeting with my friends. Because when I finshed work, I’m so tired and I need to heal.
My favorite activity is meeting with my friends because when I finished work, I’m so tired and I need to heal.
Avoid starting your sentence with "because". The reason you can’t usually start a sentence with “because” is because the sentence needs two parts for because to join together. Usually, “because” goes in between the two clauses, so if we start a sentence with “because” there is often only one clause in the sentence.
Be careful with your spelling - F-I-N-I-S-H-E-D.
So When I meet my friends, I feel better.
So when I meet my friends, I feel better.
This sentence is correct, but the first letter of when shouldn't be capitalized.
I feel better when I meet with my friends.
I usually meet my friend after work and eat a delicious food or drinking.
I usually meet my friend after work and eat a delicious food or drink.
Sometimes I go to a drive. I really love it.
I sometimes go driving. I really love it.
Avoid starting your sentence with 'sometimes' in an academic writing, although there's nothing wrong with it when it comes to informal verbal and witting communication/language.